I've noticed this strange trend in the prose style of novels, and I've wondered why it's happening. I finally realized that the prevalence of social media is almost certainly the culprit. I won't try to write a whole thesis on the history of this type of thing, but I think it's pretty commonly accepted that… Continue reading Social Media’s Negative Effect on Prose Style
I often find some really bad sentences in books I read. I wanted to start a series in which we look at why they are bad and how to fix them. Unfortunately, I'm a bit stuck on how to proceed. I really want this blog to lift up excellent books and art. I don't want… Continue reading Found Clunkers, Part 1
If you've been coming here awhile, then you're probably somewhat interested in prose style. I've turned some of my blog posts and personal notes from the past ten years of doing this into a short (Kindle) e-book. They've been edited and expanded with examples, so nothing should be an exact replica of what you've read… Continue reading Free Book on Style
Even her books for adults, written under the name Robert Galbraith, have terrible prose style. Her sentences contain missing clauses, poor construction, confused tense and point of view, imprecise descriptions, and poor word choice.
Today we'll look at some prose from Steven Erikson's Gardens of the Moon. It is both some of the best fantasy prose writing I've seen, and one of the most original and captivating fantasy novels I've read. I'm kind of in awe of it still. I've come across so many passages I wanted to use for… Continue reading Examining Pro’s Prose, Part 14
I'm doing a midweek update to inform you I've changed my Patreon goals. I originally said that I wanted to be at $100 per month by the end of the year in order to keep the blog "alive." But now I'm changing that to $50 per month by the end of September (with the old… Continue reading Midweek Patreon Update
As I continue to read poorly edited (I'm not referring to typos) KU books, I continue to find fundamental problems to talk about. Here's one that will probably be obvious to many people when I point it out, but it would never jump out in a self-editing session to them. Here's a real example: Maria… Continue reading Lessons in the Fundamentals of Writing, Part 3